without having looked too deeply into this, a few things stand out:
you shouldn’t pay anything down ($721)
the dealer is effectively lowering the price of the car $2044.60 ($2000 is factory rebate). That’s not enough discount in my opinion. It is not a very desirable car at the moment and should yield a better discount.
Have you tried running a 24 or 27 month lease ? They could potentially have a better payment. Also, unless something changed you can extend your lease by 6 mo, so if the 27 mo payment is better that’s really a 33 mo lease.
I would suggest putting multiple security deposits down which are refundable and will lower your monthly payment.